They make take everything we own
But they won’t get to take our lives
So tired of missing happy outcomes
All because we lack the cash
Oh can’t I just go and take her
Anywhere she wants to go
I’ve been tired of hearing the answer
As our future seems to be cold
A piece of paper may drive us
Down a one way road

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Comment by Ashlee Viesca on December 26, 2010 at 9:29pm
Aw this is a good poem, even though it's sad. I'm sorry things have been tough on you Edmond. Hope things get better soon....
Comment by Edmond on December 26, 2010 at 10:06pm
Thanks Ashlee. I'm sure they will. It is sad when the people we know struggle with everything. Some struggle all of their lives. It just isn't right.
Comment by Edmond on December 26, 2010 at 10:27pm
Anytime :) I like what you did there. Awesome.
Comment by Tammy on December 27, 2010 at 7:25pm
I really enjoy reading your poetry. Its very meaningful. Thank you.


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